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Yes you are quite right everything you said are all true I seen and witness to my mother land that I came from.True that human is born like a blank page about if we born into a "rat race" or a competitive world we will push each other like my country most of the people want to be in the top they don't care if they hurt someone.I can say that human born in the cirstances that means some lucky enough they have a choice while others are unfortunate they don't have any means to have a chance to challenge in life.I felt sorry to the one who are so vulnerable can't defend their selves and I believed that people here before they experienced what we also experienced and I can say that life is not fair but anyway that's life.